January 19, 2010
666 mowhak lane
Spikesville, British Columbia
Canada IMS PKD
Mr. Kleats
Central High School,123 main street
Sportstown, British Columbia
Canada V2A 1W3
Dear Mr. Kleats:
Hi my name is Moe, I am sending this letter in interest towards my son, Tony Hawk's junior boys rugby team. first i would like to congratulate you on the teams success in the tournament last month and the great turn out you have this season.
I have recently attended o few of your rugby practices, and have made a careful observation towards the situation happening during said practices. One of the situation that has presented is the disappointment of my child when we arrive to the field and must wait for practice to start. i feel i little punctuality would improve the morality in our children.
I have also noted that often the children are not quite sure whats going on or where precisely there supposed to be particularly in the scrum. And occasionally what position they are playing.
As well as that I have realized that some of the children sit on the sidelines mostly instead of participating in the game. I feel that if all the children are played that the spirit of the game would rise. Included with that the emphasis on winning is way to much and should be relaxed in order to make to game more enjoyable.
And finally I have realized that the team is not perfect but they are only 14 and 15 years old and profanity towards them is unnecessary.
Sincerely,
Moe Hawk
Tuesday, January 19, 2010
Thursday, January 14, 2010
synthesis write.
The texts "The Most Powerful Question A Parent Can Ask..." by Neil Millar, and "Be-ers and Doers" by Budge Wilson chronicle two family's and there very different approaches at raising children. One explains that you should give your children certain responsibility's and the other determines the difference between slacking and enjoying the time and working all the time and keeping concentrating.
In "The Most Powerful Question A parent Can Ask...", Neil Millar defines the difference between how most kids get raised and how they should be properly raise to live success full lives. He states that there are many things that shape our children and many things that rub off on them such as morals and values. He acknowledges that most people are different and asks us if our "mother's old values working for [us]". As well, Millar Chronicles how parents do not always know what they want for there kids and states very clearly that he believes that the most power full question u can ask a parent is "what kind of children do you want to raise?". And shows that the majority of us let our kids just slack off and out there head through the clouds.
Now much like Millar exclaimed, Budge Wilson declares that her son that he is to much a "be-er" and wants him to be more like his sister whom is more like a "doer". The father in the story is the "be-er" kind as well and spent lots of time staring out the window or lieing on his back watching the clouds. The mom is consistently pleading the son to try harder in school especially after he came home with "a low mark in [his] math test". And Wilson continues explaining how this whole "be-er" attitude is incorrect.
Through out both of these compositions Neil Millar and Budge Wilson interpret how a child should be successfully be raised. They demonstrate what precisely is wrong with laid back parenting and how a proper parenting skill may exercise the proper skill needed for the future
In "The Most Powerful Question A parent Can Ask...", Neil Millar defines the difference between how most kids get raised and how they should be properly raise to live success full lives. He states that there are many things that shape our children and many things that rub off on them such as morals and values. He acknowledges that most people are different and asks us if our "mother's old values working for [us]". As well, Millar Chronicles how parents do not always know what they want for there kids and states very clearly that he believes that the most power full question u can ask a parent is "what kind of children do you want to raise?". And shows that the majority of us let our kids just slack off and out there head through the clouds.
Now much like Millar exclaimed, Budge Wilson declares that her son that he is to much a "be-er" and wants him to be more like his sister whom is more like a "doer". The father in the story is the "be-er" kind as well and spent lots of time staring out the window or lieing on his back watching the clouds. The mom is consistently pleading the son to try harder in school especially after he came home with "a low mark in [his] math test". And Wilson continues explaining how this whole "be-er" attitude is incorrect.
Through out both of these compositions Neil Millar and Budge Wilson interpret how a child should be successfully be raised. They demonstrate what precisely is wrong with laid back parenting and how a proper parenting skill may exercise the proper skill needed for the future
Sunday, January 3, 2010
Expository essay
Role models influence our lives in many ways. They show thing in life that can be simply change in many different ways. And they also show how many things can turn someone evil, or good. they also prove how society is improved by the many laws and regulations
So to start things off role models, they show the things in life that can be simply changed in many ways. For instance Popeye, you know the sailor man, well I imagine that he was lots of kids role models and shows when he eats his spinach then he get really strong in muscular, I know for me it made me eat my spinach. as well as that they also can prove that no matter how geekish or ordinary person can jump in a phone booth or in a alley somewhere and come out a super hero
They also show how many things can turn someone to evil or good. For instance in spider man when he turns into the black spidey he changes a lot he becomes evil. As soon as he puts that suit on he changes from the hero to the villain. as well as many people you see on TV that start off as really cool people and are nice and stuff then the show continues on they change drastically just cause they starting hanging out with someone new or they lost someone they really cared bout and they become evil and start being completely different often getting into drugs and stuff.
finally they show how many laws and regulations improve society. The super hero's especially show this because they go out and stop crimes against those laws and show us that this is what happens to you when you defy the laws...
so inconclusion role models effect everyone
Role models influence our lives in many ways. They show thing in life that can be simply change in many different ways. And they also show how many things can turn someone evil, or good. they also prove how society is improved by the many laws and regulations
So to start things off role models, they show the things in life that can be simply changed in many ways. For instance Popeye, you know the sailor man, well I imagine that he was lots of kids role models and shows when he eats his spinach then he get really strong in muscular, I know for me it made me eat my spinach. as well as that they also can prove that no matter how geekish or ordinary person can jump in a phone booth or in a alley somewhere and come out a super hero
They also show how many things can turn someone to evil or good. For instance in spider man when he turns into the black spidey he changes a lot he becomes evil. As soon as he puts that suit on he changes from the hero to the villain. as well as many people you see on TV that start off as really cool people and are nice and stuff then the show continues on they change drastically just cause they starting hanging out with someone new or they lost someone they really cared bout and they become evil and start being completely different often getting into drugs and stuff.
finally they show how many laws and regulations improve society. The super hero's especially show this because they go out and stop crimes against those laws and show us that this is what happens to you when you defy the laws...
so inconclusion role models effect everyone
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